Have just completed 4 pages plus title page, moving onto inking, but would like some comments on current work if possible. thanks.

Liquid Desires (by Leena): Cover Draft (pencil)

I'm still working on the drawing but would like to get some critique on the general composition, etc. for the cover art.

Angie's pencils, pg 6 and 7

Am I the only one still posting pages?

Page 6:



Page 7:



I am fairly happy with these so far, but if anyone sees anything glaringly wrong or jarring, please let me know before I ink!

Angie's pg 3, 4 and pencils for 5

I am SO close to finishing my pencils for page 6, but i wanted to at least get up what I had to get some advice. Sorry if this goes up too late for any crits for tonight's class. Mostly I wanted help with blackspotting before I scan at 600 dpi to photoshop.

Page 3 ink...no blackspotting yet:



page 4 ink:



Page 5 pencils:

Nov 11 Crits

Well done on another good week's work everyone. Keep it up, and continue to post your work on the blog. Just a reminder: next week we'll be designing our covers, so if you think you will need to use any specific picture references then bring them in. Also, please try and bring in your laptops with photoshop on so we can scan what we have and use class time to touch up our work.
In no apparent order, here are the crits we went through last night:

From Québec to California, Page 1

I did not scan, I took a picture.

Liquid Desires (by Leena): pg. 4 Drawing w/some Ink

The drawing is still in-progress even though I've inked some of the work...