Second leena's post above. From what I can tell, drama is set up nicely so far. Only suggestion I have might be to try to vary the angle of the characters somewhat...just glancing at page seems to have a lot of characters looking straight at reader.
excited to see the car accident all inked-out! Also, I like that your use of phones to communicate who is calling. I enjoy the changes in point of view.
hi Brian, I wanted to click on your pages and get a closer look but for some reason, your pics are not click-able (everyone else's are).
ReplyDeleteSecond leena's post above. From what I can tell, drama is set up nicely so far. Only suggestion I have might be to try to vary the angle of the characters somewhat...just glancing at page seems to have a lot of characters looking straight at reader.
ReplyDeleteexcited to see the car accident all inked-out! Also, I like that your use of phones to communicate who is calling. I enjoy the changes in point of view.
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