Its been a slow process. Most of the stress rising from trying to fit the words in (not so much on these pages, but on later ones). Also, I did not anticipate my paper being larger than my scanner bed, hence the crazy shadows.
Ha. Awesomeness. Only comment/suggestion...on the last panel of the first page, it's not super clear she's blotting her own reflection out (I know we discussed this). Maybe change angle or posture? and is there a REASON that the long-haired girl is sweet and the short haired-one is surly???? :P
i think all the pages you've put are amazing, but I especially like the last two panels of page one, holding plastic cat ears with a heavy sigh as if to say, "Back to the salt mines."
These look sooo professional; I'm totally jealous!
ReplyDeleteHa. Awesomeness. Only comment/suggestion...on the last panel of the first page, it's not super clear she's blotting her own reflection out (I know we discussed this). Maybe change angle or posture? and is there a REASON that the long-haired girl is sweet and the short haired-one is surly???? :P
ReplyDeleteI'm starting to panic about what to put in the background of my panels...so much blank space!
ReplyDeletei think all the pages you've put are amazing, but I especially like the last two panels of page one, holding plastic cat ears with a heavy sigh as if to say, "Back to the salt mines."
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